IBT寫(xiě)作:句法組織常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題分析
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句法組織對(duì)與IBT寫(xiě)作能起到非常大的幫助作用,因?yàn)橐黄獙?xiě)作文法組織得當(dāng),用詞恰當(dāng)?shù)奈恼赂荏w現(xiàn)一個(gè)考生在英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法方面的掌握能力,更能體現(xiàn)出考生使用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言對(duì)某一問(wèn)題和看法闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的語(yǔ)言能力和技巧,而IBT寫(xiě)作部分所要考察考生的一個(gè)終極目的便是評(píng)測(cè)考生是否能在英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的課堂環(huán)境或是學(xué)術(shù)環(huán)境中使用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出流利而出色的學(xué)術(shù)報(bào)告的能力,因此考生需要加強(qiáng)對(duì)寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言能力,尤其是英語(yǔ)句法的學(xué)習(xí)和把握。
一般來(lái)講,考生容易在寫(xiě)作中出現(xiàn)的文法及句法錯(cuò)誤有以下方面,本文著重從英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)這些錯(cuò)誤依次進(jìn)行舉例分析:
結(jié)構(gòu)不平行: I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當(dāng)使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來(lái)的時(shí)候,應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語(yǔ)。
段落過(guò)長(zhǎng),不分段,主語(yǔ)與動(dòng)詞一致問(wèn)題: She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一致。
句子別扭:We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過(guò)長(zhǎng)或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。
關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)重復(fù):Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語(yǔ)和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞。
句子不完整: Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.句子沒(méi)有主要主語(yǔ)或主要?jiǎng)釉~,因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是一個(gè)非常常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤,修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來(lái)。
介詞多余: I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見(jiàn)于downtown,home,there,here等詞。這些詞語(yǔ)在英語(yǔ)中是副詞而非名詞,因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
重復(fù)冗余:Personally,I believe what the newspaper prints. 一種意思的表述不止一次,或者某個(gè)詞語(yǔ)不必要。
單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤:Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù),或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用,應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary"s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ)有問(wèn)題:I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問(wèn)題, 缺少主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或賓語(yǔ),或者這些成分重復(fù)。
語(yǔ)氣與文章不符:I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.語(yǔ)氣與文章其他部分不相符, 可能是過(guò)于正式或者太不正式。
代詞指代不明:If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there. 代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
過(guò)于籠統(tǒng): We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.句子或它所表達(dá)的意思過(guò)于籠統(tǒng),不能提供多少信息。
動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤:Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過(guò)去時(shí)、將來(lái)時(shí)還是完成時(shí)等等。
選詞不恰當(dāng):I was late getting home because I lost my way.在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞可選擇更好的詞語(yǔ)或者所使用的詞語(yǔ)與文章的總體語(yǔ)氣不符。
單詞形式不當(dāng):I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的單詞的形式不正確檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。
用詞錯(cuò)誤:Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.用詞錯(cuò)誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。