高考英語作文寫作如何讓句子“靚”起來
2011-12-15 13:31:39新浪博客
高考英語書面表達高分作文已不局限于把話說清楚,把意思表達完整,而是要讓文章的句子表達得更加地道,流暢,因此要想取得作文高分,我們要善于靈活運用高級句式、句型,熟練掌握潤色句子的技能,讓我們的文章靚起來。如何讓我們的文章靚起來呢?很多人都強調(diào)用連詞、介詞等詞匯手段迅速提高語言水平。但這僅限制在詞匯層面上,更重要的是我們要靈活運用那些經(jīng)典的句式。通過對低級句型的改變,可以達到語言優(yōu)美這一目的。
◆感嘆句:通常用于開頭結尾活躍文章氣氛,凡是“I feel ……”之類表達感情的句子皆可如此轉(zhuǎn)換。
How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.
◆強調(diào)句:可以輕松地將時間、地點、原因、方式等類型的狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閺娬{(diào)句。
It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag in the classroom.
It was then that I realized the importance of English.
◆倒裝句:只要句中有介詞短語或狀語從句,便可將其提前,變成倒裝句。
Only when I turned the right at the crossing did that car ran towards me.
Only by this means can he escaped from the big fire.
◆with的復合結構:可以將狀語從句或并列句中的其中一個分句變成with復合結構。
With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
He always likes to sleep with the windows open.
◆巧妙地使用非謂語動詞:可以將狀語從句或并列的動詞簡化為非謂語動詞。
Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低級形式:When he heard that, ……)
◆恰到好處的被動句:適合應用于較簡短的句子,這樣顯得語言簡潔生動,賓語一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代詞。
After searching all my pockets, but nothing was found。
◆高級定語從句:若定語從句中的動詞帶有介詞,只需將介詞移至先行詞后。
We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.
◆進行時態(tài):有時會含有一定情緒,尤其要使用always這樣的富含感情色彩的副詞。
I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.
◆婉轉(zhuǎn)表達:需要使用幽默的技巧,主要用于漫畫型作文題。
I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned home learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.
◆what引導的名詞性從句:將動賓結構轉(zhuǎn)化為此結構。
What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.
◆“數(shù)詞+名詞”變?yōu)?ldquo;as many as+數(shù)詞+名詞”。
As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests.
◆適當加一些插入語:一些連詞、副詞可以放到句子中間充當語氣較弱的插入語,如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, what’s more等,有時可以考慮幾個插入語連用,就更像英美人士的文章了。
◆獨立主格:將主從句去掉連詞,前句動詞變?yōu)榉衷~即可。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
◆把簡單句改成復合句:適當?shù)臅r候把兩個簡單句改成“too….to…”或者“so…that…”等高級一點的復合句。例如:
I was very tired. I couldn’t keep up with them.
可以改成:I was so tired that I couldn’t keep up with them.
或:I was too tired to keep up with them.
待你掌握了這些實用的句式,讓句子靚起來便不再難,只要你堅持運用,相信孰能生巧,高考中就可以取得滿意的成績!